well..

You really improved, that's for sure but you have to work harder
if you want i can give you some advices... but seriously listen to tal9x9 because he gives you really good advices (at least he just said that)
well my advices:
there are some places that the motion tween is just too long and lagged
second change the font of the text cause it just look too normal
third sometimes when you use v-cam the screen looks very weird, i mean you have to be accurate when you shrink or make the v-cam bigger
i hope i helped you. :3

one minute ...

did he call his mom "eema"? which is mom in Hebrew....

yay!!

i can see the elephant picture!!

this is great!

the original one is awful, so i thought that will be awful to, but it's awesome!

hey!

i think you need to give me some credit!